英语翻译
AnalienvisitedShenzhen
In2020year,ShenzhenisbestbusierorbeatifulscityonChina.TherearelotsofpeoplelivesinShenzhen.Peopleharderworkingeveryday,andlifesarehappy.
Onaday,Theskybecomeblack.AbigspaceshiplandingonShenzhen.Auglyaliengetoutthisspaceship.Heverytall.HeswimmingatDaMeiSha.Thenherunto
aZOO.Heeatlotsofanimal.AfterthatherundownEmpireStateBuilding.Therearefrightening.Thenextday,hetakeherspaceshipandgobacktoherplanet.
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