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求大神修改英语作文.WhenIsawthistopic,Ithoughtwhenisthetimeweneedheroes,andlifeinthe21stcenturyweneedintheendwhatis!Forthefirstquestion,theherousuallyappearinmartialartsorwar,gettingridofmaintainingsocia
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更新时间:2024-04-27
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求大神修改英语作文.

WhenIsawthistopic,Ithoughtwhenisthetimeweneedheroes,andlifeinthe21stcenturyweneedintheendwhatis!

Forthefirstquestion,theherousuallyappearinmartialartsorwar,gettingridofmaintainingsocialpeace.Butifyouthinkthatwearelivinginapeacefulsociety,therefore,wedonotneedheroes.Thenyouarewrong.Whatisahero.Thehero'sdutyistohelppeoplesolvetheirproblems.Weknowthatalthoughweliveinapeacefulsociety,butmoreandmorepeoplehavedifficulty,atthesametimethegapbetweentherichandpoorisalsogrowing.Therefore,weneedaherowhocanhelpusinourlife.Thereisnoreason.

Forthesecondquestion,whatiswhatweneedtoday?Money,houses,carsandpower?Idonotthinkthathavingtheseyoucanbehappy.Weonlyknowthatthedevelopmentofthematerialaspects,whileneglectingthedevelopmentofourspiritual.Wordsforme,Ineedtobeabravemantostaywithme,heismyhero.

Wheneverweneedalotofthings.Ofcourse,weneedahero.Thisisobvious.

陈淑铃回答:
  WhenIseethistopic,Ithinkit'stimeforustodiscoverheroes.Becausethisiswhatweneedinthelifeof21stcentury   Asforthefirstquestion,theherosusuallyoccurintheartsandwars.Theyfightwithevilandmaintainpeaceofsociety.Butifyoubelievethatwearelivinginapeacefulsociety,andwedonotneedanyheroe,thenyouarewrong.Whatisahero?Theheros'dutyistohelppeopleandsolvetheirproblems.Weknowthatalthoughweliveinapeacefulsociety,butmoreandmorepeoplearehavingdifficulties.Atthesametime,thegapbetweentherichandpoorisalsogrowing.Therefore,weneedaherowhocanhelpusinourlifewithoutadoubt.   Furthermore,whatweneedtoday?Peoplemayanswerthatweneedmoney,houses,carsandpower,butIdonotagreewiththemthatmerelyhavingthese,andyoucanbehappy.Weareonlyeagerforthedevelopmentofthematerialaspects,andneglectingthedevelopmentofourspiritualinsight.Tobehonest,Ineedsomeonecanbeabraveman,andstaywithme.Hewillbemyherowheneverweareinneed.It'sobviousthateveryoneneedahero.   改了一点点,不知道还符不符合你的原意.ps英文写作提示,句号逗号后面空一格
刘书暖回答:
  我又改了点才71分、、、、
陈淑铃回答:
  你要是想改个高分就直接说嘛,我可以明天给你,我今晚的复习AP美国历史,期末要到了。。。。
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