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我马上就要考了能帮我看看怎么在短期内提高吗谢谢感激不尽急

议论文题目是有些情况下谎言是否能被接受

Thereisaseveredebateonlying.Ithinkavariouskindsoflyingwithdifferentpurposesexistinthesociety.Somearebadwithhazardandsomearegoodwhichmaycureapainfulman.Facingtheagruement,Ihavemyownideas.Haveyoueverexperiencedarelative'spassingaway?Ifyouhaveexperiencedthis,youwillbesuretoagreetotheideathattherearetimeswhenlyingisacceptable.

Youmayfeelconfusedaboutthatconclusion.Andnowletmeillustratemyreasonsinthefolowingparagraphs.

Themostimportantreasonisthatsometimeslyingmakesonewhoisfacinganvitalsituationstaycalm.Ihavelearnedastorythatagirlwasattendingansignificanttestwhich

wouddetermineherdestiny,butherfatherdiedinanaccidentwhenshewashavinghertest.Forthesakeofthepoorgirl,herrelativesdidnottoldherthecatastrophy.Accordingly,shehaspassedthetest.AlthoughShehasalreadylostherfather,shehasnotlostherfuture.

Thesecondreason,lieswhicharelikeakindofmedicinecancurethewoundinpeople’sheart,weighstheequalimportancetothefirstone.Insomeoccasion,lyingmayprotectsomeonewhoisunconfidentfrombeinghurted.Although,youknowthatheisnot

thatwellorhemaynotbesointelligent,youdonottellhimthetruthinsteadoftellinghimthatheisthebestofall.Andnowtheliemayinspiretheweakguytoastrongwillingman.

Inthelast,ifyouliewithoutanythinghazardandonthepurposeofhelpingsomeone,yourliewon'tbeabadthinginsteadofapositivewaytotriggeramanwhoisindepressiontostandupagain.Ihaveafriendwhowasbadwithhisgradeofphysics.Whentheexamwasapproaching,healmostknewnothingaboutthetextbook.Buthisteacherinspiredhimbylyingtohim,said“Ibelieveyoucanfixitandthenmakeadifference.”Asyoucanimagine,hegotanAatlast.

Consideringallthesituationsabove,awhiteliesometimesplaysanroleofsavingratherthancheating.Sowheniamfacingsuchoccasion,iwillchoosetolie.Inconclusion,theideathattherearetimeswhenlyingisacceptablemaybesupported.